His eyes softly touch
As his fingers, hands
Thoroughly explore.
caressing, stroking, ripples across her chest, hardened nipples, weakened legs, roughness spills
Skin was her boundary
Until those lips
Took her beyond
hunger travels from his lips, to her cheeks, down her neck, between breasts, teasing, licking, until they enfold her nectar
Moans swell with passion
As control bends
By kisses that surrender
she arches her back, accepts arousal, rousing, stimulation that loosens her stance of being in charge
Limits are a distant memory
As they indulge
Further that internal crave
her mind blanks of restraint, his want far exceeds the power to hold back, allowing him beyond her boundary
Bodies become reckless
Succumb to another
Grunts are their only sound
intensity forces windows to open as they join in a rhythmical motion as one, together, melting within the moment
Flood gates open
The release screams
Consent to concede
nothing could hold their waters from spilling into the main stream of emotions, an approval to admit to one another’s defeat
*All pictures via Pinterest
DayDreamWriter 
Perfect, perfect — !
First of all … mmmmmm!!!!
Second … the format works beautifully. A lovely rhythm — a tension and release, the whole way through this piece.
Really enjoying this —!
Thank you for taking the time to comment. Mmmmm sounds the tension ? or the release? 🙂 Either sounds good to me. Yes I wrote it two different ways and decided this flowed the best. I truly appreciate your input. Thanks again.
“Mmmm” indicates a bit of (pleasant!) tension on the part of this reader 😉
Almost experimental, this format – and I think it added to the meaning and the feel of the poem very well.
Reblogged this on Wet Bliss and commented:
A beautiful build and enduring release., well worth the time to read.
Thank you for the comments and share. I appreciate you 🙂